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Firekiln

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Support

  1. Epic, everything resolved on discord Loqiical (talk) 10:32, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
  2. AxMech (talk) 14:54, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:17, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
  4. ThrawnChiss7 ThrawnHS Alliances Assembly Cupola 02:23, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:30, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
  6. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 16:44, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • History could use some further sub-sectioning (and therefore some new quotes and possibly an image)
    • Subsection and quote added. There's no room for an image. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:50, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
      • I'd say there is: maybe an image of the Death Squadron? I don't feel strongly about it, so I won't insist if you disagree. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:44, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
        • I disagree, but I guess there's no problem with adding one. Added the image you suggested. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:56, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
  • The fourth paragraph in History should probably be split up.
  • The intro should be trimmed a bit. (It currently makes up for one fourth of the article, which is a little too much).
  • Per precedent, you don't have to reference Storm-hair to the second ref note every time, only the first one.
  • You should add the shields to the infobox. (Example)
    • I shouldn't. Reasoning has been sent via Discord but I'll leave it here for other reviewers and future reference: We don't know if the shielding consists of deflector shields, armor, stones, or any type of physical shielding. As we don't know what this shielding is, we can't mention it in the infobox. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:50, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Since Lord Odo doesn't actually exist, rather than "posing as," what would you say about "under the pseudonym of?" LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 17:33, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Good idea. Article modified. Thank you for all this! Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:50, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
  • I haven't read the novel, so forgive me if it's a stupid question, but why would Esva want his attack squadron divided? (Third paragraph of "Battle at Teptixii"). It seems like he is acting against his own interests; is this further explained in the book? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:44, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
    • The book doesn't explain why, but why shouldn't I say what I think? :P - Nuso Esva would like his servants aboard the Chimaera to think that he was a good tactician and specially, one better than Drusan, so that they would serve him without question. Or, if someone thought he could be Esva, attacking one of Esva's attack squadrons would prompt anyone who suspects Odo = Esva to think their suspicions are wrong. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:56, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
Thrawn
  • In the "Role" section, could you mention that they could be used as part of a squadron? -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:44, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
    • No. The "Role" only mentions what a ship was designed for, e.g. transport, not their usage. Their usage is mentioned in the "History" section. Unnecessary to state they could be used as part of a squadron when that can happen with any ship. "History" mentions that Firekilns were part of a squadron anyways. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 15:45, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni

Comments

  • Note for everyone reveiwing any of these two: This "Lord Odo" shouldn't have an article, as it's just what people knew Esva as. The warlord pose as a non-existent Lord Odo, basically. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:29, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:44, 24 January 2023 (UTC)