Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fird

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Fird

• Nominated by: Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 10:38, October 23, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Whaddya know? It's not TOR related!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Just take care of Floyd's objections. Good job!--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:24, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
3. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:36, October 25, 2011 (UTC)
4. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:34, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
5. How could I not? Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 18:19, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Floyd:

• Context on what an Outer Expansion Zone actually is is needed in the intro.
  • Got it.
• Intro: "The endeavor that later ended in a political crisis that forced the Senate to intervene in the region and reign in the Oligarchy." Sentence fragment. Revise.
  • That that shouldn't be there. Removed. Thanks for the review! Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 02:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
• That's all. Good work. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:45, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:14, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

• Thanks to Tranner for letting me do this one/reminding me that this should be done. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 10:38, October 23, 2011 (UTC)