Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Finn (bartender)

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Finn (bartender)

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:52, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Now that the article's "Finnished," this cool dude can join Jak…

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Pre-nom reviewed. —Master Jonathan New Jedi Order (Jedi Council Chambers) 17:09, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:18, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 00:35, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
  4. De-FINN-itely an awesome article! Menkooroo 03:50, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 20:01, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote -- 1358 (Talk) 13:00, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Xd1358
  • "…who visited with Jool." What do you mean? In the body, you imply that he was there to visit the Hutt, however, in this sentence, you imply that he visited the cantina /with/ Jool. Which one is correct?
    • I omitted "with," I guess it depends on how one reads it. Thanks for the review.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:07, September 8, 2010 (UTC)
      • I altered it slightly; see if you approve. -- 1358 (Talk) 13:00, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
  • -- 1358 (Talk) 10:52, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:54, September 10, 2010 (UTC)