Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Finis Valorum's father

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Contents

  • 1 Finis Valorum's father
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Macaroni
        • 1.1.2.2 OOM
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Finis Valorum's father

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:12, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: George Bush Sr.
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:39, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:52, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:12, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote OOM 224 17:56, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
  5. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 18:02, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • {{Imo}} is unnecessary for articles with conjectural titles. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:14, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:35, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Not seeing a need for inconsistent referencing between infobox and body for gender. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:16, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:34, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • "considered a fitting touch" — does the source say considered by who? OOM 224 19:19, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
    • It's part of the third person narration so no.
  • Also, "when the opportunity arose" — the way the sentence is written, this could refer either the chance to chastise the Nebula Front or the chance to eliminate them. OOM 224 19:21, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Reworded Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:25, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:04, 29 November 2021 (UTC)