Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Final Assault on Csilla

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Final Assault on Csilla

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:40, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: chiss ascendancy neva losssss
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:31, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Objections handled via Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:38, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 02:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
4. Please note my edits. Samonic ^(Talk) 12:36, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 22:21, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• (Review notes)
  • Don't forget about those new fields. I didn't create them for nothing :P
  • In infoboxes, we prefer to not make the "unidentified" part of titles visible, instead going with something like, for example, "An OOM command battle droid".
• The infobox currently does not reflect the forces in which the Chiss's opponent had, namely the fleet.
• It also doesn't reflect that the Starflash and other forces were destroyed in the fight, neither does the outcomes field. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 21:52, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
  • addressed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:30, 29 November 2022 (UTC)

Samonic

• The weapon and all twenty Mitth, known as the Starflash team, were loaded onto a heavily armed ship and sent into the center of the waiting fleet. - Should probably specify it was the enemy fleet.
• The ship and the enemy fleets were destroyed, rendering the Chiss victorious. - Were there several fleets?
• The inhabitants of the planet were forced to move into caverns underneath the surface. - Too much detail, I think.
• Please provide context for Thomoro in the intro. Link their page too. Samonic ^(Talk) 17:59, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:32, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
• Unsourced infobox fields. Note that if there's only one unit in the units parameter, the asterisk should be removed.
• The infobox should have a maximum of two levels of indentation, so the middle one should be removed.
• If the mission to Pleknok and the Lioaoin pirate campaign are relevant to this battle, they should be mentioned in the Aftermath field, if not, they should be removed.
• Missing categories: Category:Battles in the Unknown Regions, Category:Conflicts involving the Chiss Ascendancy. Samonic ^(Talk) 13:05, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:08, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
  • done for real this time :P BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:18, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• word count currently sits at 902 (so pls be nice XD) BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:44, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
  • updated word count, 11/30/22 - 892 BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:14, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
    • word count, 1/20/23 - 905 BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 21:43, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:27, 26 January 2023 (UTC)