- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Fether
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 22:46, November 11, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Good work! Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:25, December 4, 2019 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:37, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
- But steel is heavier than fethers. 1358 (Talk) 19:04, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
- Nice job! --Lewisr (talk) 21:27, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
- Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 23:43, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
Object
Ayrehead
I feel like the quotes should be more directly linked to the planet in the attribution.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:40, December 4, 2019 (UTC)- Better? Imperators II(Talk) 21:13, December 4, 2019 (UTC)
The last sentence of the body's first paragraph should probably be split up.Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:40, December 4, 2019 (UTC)- I hope I got the one you had in mind. Imperators II(Talk) 21:13, December 4, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
Is the plural Ocsinin or Ocsinins? Because our article seems to suggest the former.- I've decided to go with Ocsin instead, since there's no plural form given for Ocsinin and Ocsin is by far the more often used term anyway. Imperators II(Talk) 10:31, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
Is the full explanatory note in reference 3 really necessary? Correct me if I'm wrong, but it seems like you can just reference that straight to the CSWE entry without elaboration.- I went with the full note because CSWE only says that the Heroc's Slayer was a freighter that pursued Rebel forces to Issagra. The adventure "Money Troubles" shows that it was the freighter's crew (not identified as Rebels in the adventure) that was pursued to Issagra from Fether. Imperators II(Talk) 13:10, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
Can I ask you to quote the sentence from the source about repulsorlift vehicles being in the town's dusty streets? It matters with regard to the potential use of a comma in that sentence.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:26, December 17, 2019 (UTC)- "While wandering around the dusty streets of the small farm town, you find yourselves the target of a sneak attack [...]" and "They [the characters] can duck behind crates and around corners for cover, while repulsorlift vehicles—landspeeders and speeder bikes—fly around on the city streets.". There's also more mentions of there being crates on the streets. Imperators II(Talk) 13:04, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:37, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
- "While wandering around the dusty streets of the small farm town, you find yourselves the target of a sneak attack [...]" and "They [the characters] can duck behind crates and around corners for cover, while repulsorlift vehicles—landspeeders and speeder bikes—fly around on the city streets.". There's also more mentions of there being crates on the streets. Imperators II(Talk) 13:04, December 17, 2019 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:43, December 17, 2019 (UTC)