Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Faddaff Davenspon

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Faddaff Davenspon

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:21, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Hopefully she used those starship skills to escape Kijimi!
• Date Archived: 07:43, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 521 words (99 introduction, 284 body, 138 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Copy-edit - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:59, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 21:46, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:43, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 17:12, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
5. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 07:42, 31 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• Last sentence of birth year note says in that year—is it firmly in that year, or approximate? Am also of the mind c. is more appealing than {{C}}, as well.
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
• Would be nice if her years of traveling the galaxy could be noted in the biography, probably right before it starts talking about Kijimi; I know it's mentioned in P/T, but it's also a history thing, too.
  • Added a mention in the bio. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
• Small bit of Final Order context might suit, even if it's just that it's a fleet.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
• Judging off the main image at least (since the P/T one seems in shadow); her clothes seem more of a gray? And/or a black that has been worn away at the edges to eventually reach a dustier gray.
  • Huh, those look distinctly black to me in both images, would be curious to hear input from others. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Yoinked out the book: it does look black in the hard copy, it just seems really washed out on the Wook upload. Ah well. Supposing not much can be done about though, so rip.—spookywilloww^talk 18:16, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
• Is it possible to crop out the uneven white edges of the BtS image; it's more noticeable on dark mode, but, still caught my eye.—spookywilloww^talk 16:09, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:12, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
• Is it possible to combine the date notes by including that she was 300 during her TROS appearance? They seem mostly the same; to improve redundancy.—spookywilloww^talk 18:16, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:40, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:42, 31 March 2023 (UTC)