Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Et Rex

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Et Rex

• Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:12, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A framed Jedi from "Poison Moon".

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. —MJ— _{War Room} 23:27, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
2. Did a copy-edit, though I have one issue, and it's in the comments. Just need something confirmed. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 05:54, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
3. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:44, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
4. Winterz (talk) 22:09, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:07, February 1, 2013 (UTC)
6. JangFett ^(Talk) 05:45, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
7. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 11:57, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
8. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 07:13, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Winterz
   • The brief skirmish deserves an article. Winterz (talk) 19:51, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:53, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
       • I know the fight was inside the starship however wouldn't the skirmish title be better suited as "Skirmish on Poison Moon"? Considering that the Starship is crashed on the asteroid. "Battles and (so on) aboard a ship" are normally used when the ship hasn't landed nor crashed ;) Winterz (talk) 21:40, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
         • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:01, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Floyd has one thing

• Same as Celz, intro is a little long. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:25, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • Taken care of.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 19:04, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• Same as Celz, can we get a date for the Dark Horse Extra issues? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:07, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 14:32, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Toprawa

• Same deal with Celz regarding the species and gender in both the Bio and P/T. You could remove one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 09:44, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
  • Taken care of.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:00, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
    • Again, as with Celz, this objection has only been half-way resolved, but I'm not going to hold it up on this. You don't need to repeat gender and species in both the Bio and P/T. It's just redundant. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 11:57, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:24, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

• Many thanks to Master Jonathan for copy-edit and review.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:12, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
• Something occurred to me while reviewing this, but I may be mistaking it for something else. I don't currently have my omnibus with me, but I seem to remember it saying that Poison Moon was one of Hasbro's mini-comics. If you look at how it is reprinted, the layout seems to indicate this. Again, I don't have my Menace Revealed Omnibus with me, so I can't check for sure. Could someone double-check this? Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 05:54, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • The publisher's summary on Dark Horse says this: "Collects Star Wars #27: Starcrash; Star Wars: The Hunt for Aurra Sing; Star Wars: Jedi Quest #1-#4; Star Wars: Starfighter—Crossbones #1-#3; Star Wars Episode II Hasbro minicomics #1-#4; "Heart of Fire" from Dark Horse Extra #35-#37; and "Poison Moon" from Dark Horse Extra #44-#47."~—Unsigned comment by Jedi Kasra (talk • contribs)
    • I recall, however, that on the page preceding the comic, it said it was a mini-comic. I might be mistaking it for another comic, but could the page be double-checked? Nevermind, I must be thinking of something else. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 05:11, January 28, 2013 (UTC)