Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Enforcer One (dreadnaught)

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Enforcer One (dreadnaught)

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:43, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Insert witty comment here.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:15, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
3. —Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 21:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
4. --TK-299 ^{(Click Here)} 11:16, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
5. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 23:22, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 03:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

• A dumb question, not the greatest at grammar, so I'm wondering...."Enforcer One also counted among its crew Grimorg, a Weequay who was one of Bogga's top enforcers." Does there need to be a comma between crew and Grimorg? It just seems weird to me, almost sounds like crew Grimorg is an object of sorts. Just pretend this conversation never happened if I am waaay off. TK-299 ^{(Click Here)} 11:20, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  • That would make the sentence very choppy, and would mess up the flow. Having two commas is unnecessary. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:18, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
    • Gotcha, I understand. Thanks! TK-299 ^{(Click Here)} 09:12, June 1, 2010 (UTC)