Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Elyas Caran

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Elyas Caran

• Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 16:37, March 20, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Don't look now, but FotJ is back!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 17:33, March 20, 2010 (UTC)
2. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:52, March 20, 2010 (UTC)
3. Vote or die! Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:51, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
4. I'll vote. :P JangFett ^(Talk) 04:09, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
5. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:48, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
6. Clean as a whistle. Grunny (talk) 10:00, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Toprawa:
   • How did they treat Jedi? A short explanation would be good here: "the same way that they treated Jedi."
     • Specified. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 03:40, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
   • What is this, a breathing tank? Can we specify at all? "had run a gas line of carbon monoxide into her tank"
     • Specified. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 03:40, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
   • The P/T explains that Caran is ordered by Daala to read the suicide note, but the bio doesn't really explain this, which I think it should. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:49, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
     • Done. Thanks as always for the reivew, Tope. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 03:40, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:17, March 27, 2010 (UTC)