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Elsinoré den Tasia

Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:15, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Really like this backstory
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~~Is the famous Jedi Master mentioned in the biography section notable enough for an article?~~ VergenceScatter (talk) 18:58, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
- I've never been sure on this one, I've always assumed that they meant to imply that it was Vima Sunrider given the name of one of the ships, but we can't technically confirm it and I don't know if we should create conjectural articles when they're likely to refer to an existing character Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:56, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
  - Fair enough. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:36, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
    - Thinking it over it might actually be more helpful to readers to have an article for it so that we have a spot to say that the Jedi's identity isn't confirmed. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:55, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

~~Context for Voren Na'al.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:42, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:00, 23 February 2022 (UTC)

Darth Plagueis dates the first 12 chapters to between 67 and 65 BBY. How can we be sure that the mention happened in exactly 67 BBY?
- I can't find anything specific to confirm the dates, so changed to include it as that range
~~I think the last history paragraph could get a paragraph break.~~
- Done
~~Nitpicking, but I think infobox dates get the "c." rather than "around" or "approximately."~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:07, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:50, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
~~I'd say the BTS is large enough to support an image, maybe the cover of Star Wars: Galactic Battlegrounds?~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:22, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:28, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

"Tasia sponsored the last expedition of three colony ships" is this the last expedition made by these ships, the last expedition from Grizmalt or the last expedition she sponsored? The current wording isn't clear. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:19, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done
  - This still needs clarifying in the intro. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:28, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
    - Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:44, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
~~I agree with Luca that the last paragraph needs a break which will mean the bio needs subsectioning.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:19, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done
~~It seems odd to pipelink Renatasia III in its first mention but then explicitly refer to it later, I'd add the full mention up front as well.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:19, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done but I had misinterpreted the mentions of the colonies earlier, in that it's meant to refer to every planet in the system, so I've had to change that up
~~The authors of Lando Calrissian and the Flamewind of Oseon and the Essential Atlas should be mentioned in the BTS.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:19, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:50, 8 March 2022 (UTC)

This article had A Guide to the Star Wars Universe, Third Edition, Revised and Expanded listed in its appearance section for years, but I found an online copy and looked through every relevant entry and found no mention of Tasia Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:10, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:57, 13 March 2022 (UTC)