Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Elke Vetter

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Elke Vetter

  • Nominated by: Grunny (Talk) 06:33, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Back to Legacy

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:04, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Cylka-talk- 05:46, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
  3. Why not?--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:55, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Graestan(Talk) 14:18, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 14:50, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Soresu
    • using the information to decide that she could let Marasiah lead her to her father or he would come to save her. Can this be reworded? The flow is a bit messed up.
      • How's that?
    • Talon used the Force to interrogate Vetter Used the Force in what way? Torture, or mind tricks?
      • Mentioned :).
    • The fact that she gave in to Talon's interrogation should be in the P&T. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 11:14, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
      • Mentioned. Thanks for reviewing as always Soresu, let me know if you see more that needs doing :-). Grunny (Talk) 02:39, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. Cylka:
    • Why were they hiding in the Imperial Mission temple?
      • Addressed.
    • I believe the paragraph would flow a bit better if you mentioned that Krayt ordered Talon to kill Roan Fel before going into how they were hiding in the temple on Socorro.
      • Moved things around a little, how's it looking now? :)
    • If you are going to mention Talon's promotion to Krayt's Hand, then Hand needs a bit more context.
      • Contextified.
    • I would change the wording around a bit in either the intro or the article proper so that both paragraph don't read word for word. I believe it will give the article a better flow.
      • Changed.
    • Another well done article, Grunny! Cylka-talk- 11:34, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks, Cylka :-). Grunny (Talk) 03:47, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
  3. Graestan the Merciless:
    • Context on how Vetter was Fel's master in the intro, please.
      • Contextified.
    • If I read "the proceeding Anti-Sith Insurgency" one more time I'll crack like an egg.
      • Changed it up :-). Grunny (Talk) 03:29, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
    • Graestan(Talk) 16:55, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
  4. From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
    • "In Star Wars Legacy 13: Ready to Die, Roan Fel tells Darth Kruhl that all Imperial Knights are equipped with cortosis gauntlets, which deactivate lightsabers on contact, however, Vetter's hand is severed through her gauntlet." - I understand why you put this in the BTS, but I don't think it's relevant. The issuing of cortosis gauntlets could easily have been done at some point after Vetter's death, she might not have gotten the memo, etc.
      • Good point, it has been removed.
    • Nice job, Grunny. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 23:40, 27 March 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks, Tranner :-). Grunny (Talk) 01:18, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments

  • Is there a picture of Talon killing Vetter with Force lightning? If so, maybe it should be added. If not, then it needs to be uploaded. I put this here because it's not an objection, just a suggestion.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:55, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:50, 29 March 2009 (UTC)