Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eelo Begraas

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Eelo Begraas

• Nominated by: --Eyrezer 23:16, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Presumably our first Living Force nomination.

(3 AC/3 users/6 total)

Support

1. I love legendary fighter pilots. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 02:16, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
2. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:00, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
3. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:21, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
4. Ozzel 04:55, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
5. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 20:10, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:37, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Soresu
   • The Bothan flew a customized Z-95 Headhunter, Dicer, whose distinctive appearance. 'Whose' is meant to refer to a person, not an object.
   • Something about the high cost of loaning him from the militiary would be nice.
   • I just read troop movements. It says His quick temper and short attention span are such that the Thaereian military recognizes the necessity of keeping him "entertained" by loaning him out. Add this into personality and traits. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:35, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
     • Should all be addressed. --Eyrezer 19:01, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • This clause is just kind of reading strange to me. Can we clean this up a little bit? " as well as the fact it kept Begraas sufficiently entertained that he remained their employee"
   • Is "Thaere" intended to refer to the Navy here? If so, I would request you specify: "or which Thaere was the Senate-appointed protector" Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:30, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:37, 21 October 2008 (UTC)