Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eddel

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Eddel

  • Nominated by: --Eyrezer 13:00, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Classic WEG goodness

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ~ SavageBob 19:29, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Imperialles 22:45, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 01:32, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:47, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Happened upon this while browsing the RCs.—Tommy 9281 20:58, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Three things:
    • Intro: "Having been prominent traders throughout the Trax sector under the Galactic Republic, they were decimated in a war against its successor, the Galactic Empire, and as a result, their number was reduced to a few thousand sentients, which were forced into slavery." A lot of commas here. Any way you can reword the sentence?
    • History: "a pleasant planet" Pleasant for who? This seems a little POV.
    • Eddel/Eddelians: If the singular form is Eddel, shouldn't that be used as the species' ethnonym instead of "Eddelian"? Examples from the article: "Eddelian starships, carrying Eddelian traders"; "Most Eddelian technology".
    • Other than that, good stuff. --Imperialles 19:38, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
      • Changed the first two and discussed the third over IRC. --Eyrezer 22:39, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)