Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/EEK-176

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EEK-176

Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 09:38, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Gee, where have I been recently

IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 05:04, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:44, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
"Beachead" a typo? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:28, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
- A little bit of research proved it was, so I fixed that. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:02, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 23:21, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 11:17, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

~~Article for the battle in Vis?~~
- The info from that's covered in the Sieges on Naboo article, as are the attacks on the other two cities, I'm unsure whether they need there own articles.
"In the Federation's landing on Naboo, EEK-176 commanded a group of droids that landed near Vis, a city that had been targeted by the droid army because of its transmitter, which if not destroyed would allow the people of Naboo to spread word of the invasion back to the Republic, damaging the Federation's plans." This sentence drags on too long and should be split up. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:52, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Any better? Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 06:35, March 8, 2013 (UTC)

~~The Biography section would benefit from a paragraph break.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:23, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 05:23, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
~~Can "Naboo soldiers" here be pipelinked to the Nabbo Royal Security Forces? "the Naboo soldiers in the city"~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:59, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 21:23, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:17, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Apoligies if my writing's slightly rusty, been busy since school started :) Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 09:38, March 5, 2013 (UTC)