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Contents

  • 1 Duwani Mechanical Products
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Floyd
        • 1.1.2.2 Cav
        • 1.1.2.3 Exiled Jedi
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Duwani Mechanical Products

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:58, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It appears this is a cross Project Hero/WP:TOR, WP:TOTJ, and WP:KOTOR article. Huh.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Couldn't find anything except THOSE REDLINKS!! :) Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 08:19, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Yeah, baby!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 06:10, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:03, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:39, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:02, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 21:09, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • "but that ended with the HK-01 assassin droid reprogrammed many juggernauts during the Great Droid Revolution of 4,015 BBY." There's an obvious error here, but I'm not sure which way you want to fix this.
    • Done.
  • Article for intelligence matrix? Nice work. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:44, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 22:54, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • After a little copy-edit, you're now up to four redlinks. At least one needs to be busted, but I would prefer all of them ;) - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:54, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • 3 redlinks down. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 18:38, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Should you link to "Old Republic era" in the in-universe section of the article? I thought that was a publishing era that was only used out-of universe.
    • Done.
  • You don't mention the New Republic in the body.
    • Done.
  • Do you think you could beef up the BTS a little more with information about some of the other sources? (The KOTOR Campaign Guide and Scavenger's Guide to Droids seem the most worthy to be mentioned.)--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:21, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
    • And done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 03:44, January 10, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:09, January 25, 2013 (UTC)