Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dox Ocean

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Dox Ocean

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:54, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 02:07, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 278 words (50 introduction, 202 body, 26 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 278 words (50 introduction, 202 body, 26 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:26, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Ah, gotta love the short ones that just barely slide over.—spookywillowwtalk 19:53, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:15, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
  4. NotBoop (talk) 20:03, March 13, 2023‎ (UTC)
  5. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 02:06, 15 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Dani
  • "which the Lazerians blocked from detection due to minerals that blocked sensor scans, which were in abundance in the water." This reads weird to me. I'm uncertain if the Lazerians purposefully block the cities from being detected or if its an accident the Lazerians can't detect them. Can this be reworded? NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:50, 15 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:06, 15 March 2023 (UTC)