Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Doel Scherp

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Doel Scherp

  • Nominated by: Jinzler 22:38, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Because I haven't nominated anything for a while

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Good stuff.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:24, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:33, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:21, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
  4. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 03:37, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grunny (talk) 05:10, October 11, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Good work. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:26, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Lee attacks
  • Is The Betrayel of Darth Revan a source for Sernpidal being in the Outer Rim?
    • Yes, it is --Jinzler 19:40, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • Otherwise nice. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:13, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for taking a look at the article --Jinzler 19:40, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
Soresu
  • Could you say in the bio or P&T that he carried a fake of the cylinder? He doesn't necessarily use it, but he must have had it with him regardless.
    • He only carried the real cylinder with him, and had some fakes in his desk. I have mentioned this in the P&T. --Jinzler 10:01, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nice work. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 08:08, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks! --Jinzler 10:01, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Two minor things. Firstly, I've noticed in your recent nominations that you refer to the Jedi Civil War as an "intergalactic" conflict, which means that it took place between two separate galaxies. I'm not sure of this myself, but I've noticed at least one user changed this in another of your nominations. If this is not correct, I would suggest revising.
    • Revised, I will make sure I don't do this in the future. --Jinzler 20:21, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
  • Also, you link to "speeder" in the BTS, which takes us to a disambig page. Can we be more specific with this linking? Airspeeder or landspeeder? Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:46, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:26, October 12, 2010 (UTC)