Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Disruption of Comm 4

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Disruption of Comm 4

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 13:09, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: "The shield is down, the AC is vulnerable."

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Good job supporting WP:VG. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 06:43, October 10, 2012 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 17:20, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
3. Per Code-8—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)}
4. Interesting. Cade Calrayn 21:00, October 26, 2012 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 18:37, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Code-8

• I think that Comm 4 should be mentioned in the first sentence since it's the focus of the battle. Something like During the Invasion of Naboo an attack to disrupt Trade Federation communications by destroying Communications Satellite 4 would work.
  • Sure, added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 13:04, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
• After they escorted him to his mountain base, the Hutt gave the resistance fighters several new fighters and vital intelligence. Please say what this intelligence is. The same thing also happens in the Prelude.
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 13:04, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
• In the aftermath section maybe say something like what the pilots from this battle did after destroying the satellite.
  • Too much, too little? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 13:04, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
• That's all.--Commander Code-8 (talk) 06:57, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 13:04, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
• More pickiness
• Intro:the Hutt gave the resistance fighters several new fighters can you find a way to remove the word repetition please.
  • Repetition nixed. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 23:59, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Orbital Battle: Context for Kol Kotha please
  • Too much, too little? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 23:59, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Context for Adela Tyche too
  • Context is my bane...added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 23:59, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Aftermath:They assaulted the base and stole a gunboat. Please say what they did with this gunboat
  • So added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 23:59, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Good luck with these--Commander Code-8 (talk) 23:45, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks again. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 23:59, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• Context for Tyche - Naboo or Borvo pilot? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:01, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 02:01, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Return of the Jedi

• There's an infobox item that hasn't been sourced. Otherwise, good work.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:18, October 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Heh, all that infobox stuff runs together. Thanks. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 02:30, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
    • Have to agree there.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:33, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

1. Short WP:VG/Battle for Naboo nomination. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 13:09, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
2. Oh, and updated for "End Game." Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 02:16, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
3. Are there any images from the disabled base attack that could be used in the aftermath section since its closely linked to this article?--Commander Code-8 (talk) 23:45, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
   • Not really, there's no room and no good ones from the other battle. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 02:26, October 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • That's fine then--Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 03:48, October 4, 2012 (UTC)

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:37, October 27, 2012 (UTC)