Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Diblen Harleys

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Diblen Harleys

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:27, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I was looking for a witty comment to put here ... but I got nuthin'.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. More support votes from me. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:27, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
2. Graestan^(Talk) 23:51, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
3. Grunny ^(Talk) 13:26, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
4. Another great article. Cylka^-talk- 06:27, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
5. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:54, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Maybe put his belief that the Empire was just and that he never tried to find otherwise before he was told by his father in the P&T (Wow, that's a very badly written sentence). And also his outrage at being deceived. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 06:19, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
   • Added to P/T section. Can't believe I missed that. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:15, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
2. Graestan the Merciless:
   • "Thrawn Crisis" needs context in the intro.
     • Done.
   • And again in the bio.
     • Done.
   • What Derlin's job was would probably help; otherwise it kinda just hangs there, like, "Who is this guy?"
     • Not actually stated what he does, just that he's part of the Coruscant Defense Force command staff. Added in.
   • Explaining that the NR occupied Coruscant and the Palace is key to understanding the whole Delta Source deal.
     • Added.
   • Nice BtS. Graestan^(Talk) 05:33, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
     • Thank you. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:45, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:02, 16 February 2009 (UTC)