Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Destruction of Protas

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Destruction of Protas

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First battle nom
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:13, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:24, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:23, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:38, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  5. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 18:05, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Links should not be present in bolded title in intro.
    • Handled with below Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Conjecture template is present, but you've bolded the whole title in the intro.
    • Didn't realise that meant we couldn't bold the whole lot, I've kept "destruction" bolded but removed from the rest, keeping the link. Is that how to handle this? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Yeah, my objection was a bit contradictory here, my bad.
  • If these quotes come from the IU short story, they should be mentioned in the attributions. See Kowakian crumb cake's quotes as an example.
    • I updated but per my query on discord and standard in referencing, put the title in double quotations without italicising, which doesn't match the crumb cake. Let me know if I've misunderstood. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:32, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Yeah, that was what I had in mind.
  • Per ample precedent, it should be mentioned somewhere that this battle was featured in the IU short story.
    • Was intro exclusive, how's that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Release year should actually be mentioned, not just in parenthesis.
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Bts should not be italicizing the story name.
    • Done
  • Unsourced bts.
    • Done
  • (Review note) Please note these edits. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:15, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Thanks, and apologies again this is clearly below my normal standard :( Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
      • All good.
  • Is there a relevant image we can use in the body? Of Kamino, perhaps?
    • Kamino image added, let me know if the caption isn't ok. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:32, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I don't think the bit about the translation is necessary for the intro. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:33, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:32, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Last thing: I'm seeing an inconsistency between "Protas's" and "Protas'". Both are correct, but it should be the same throughout the article. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:08, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Got it Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:46, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Infobox should make it clear: Creatures of Kamino or the whole galaxy?
    • Clarified, should this be split into two bullet points, one for the rule and the other for the respect? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:04, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Context for Kaminoan, akin to Unidentified aiwha pod. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:00, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
    • How's that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:04, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Had to edit some florid language out, but I can still see some more, especially in "The battle." Feel free to contest this if you think it should stay. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:03, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I think that's better? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:04, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Reviewing note: Using "this" and similar words is discourage in in-universe sections as it reads as if the article is being read to somebody, so it is substituted with words such as "that" and "those" to distance the reader from the topic. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:02, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:07, 17 January 2022 (UTC)