Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Deppo

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Deppo

• Nominated by: Xicer9^(Combadge) 18:57, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Minor DE character, just to break up the string of TCW noms.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Great job. I enjoyed reading this. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:07, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
2. As did I. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 06:24, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
3. Very good. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:45, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
4. Engine o' death. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 14:44, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
5. --Eyrezer 12:35, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • He was an audacious youth but lacked the motivation to do anything outside of his own interests. It sounds similar to the last sentence, and doesn't really add anything new. I would just integrate the audacious bit into the previous sentence and kill the motivation bit. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 07:40, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
     • Integrated. Thanks for the review. Xicer9^(Combadge) 14:09, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
2. A passing objection
   • Have you checked the audio drama for an appearance? QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 19:47, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
     • Yes I have, he's not in it. Xicer9^(Combadge) 19:52, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:05, 16 August 2009 (UTC)