Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Denal-zon

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Denal-zon

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:39, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A by-the-book cop if there ever was one.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:10, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 14:23, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:46, March 29, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 06:21, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:31, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • You give Coruscant as his homeworld in the infobox, but don't mention it in the body. Instead, you say that he served on Coruscant. Which one is correct? If both are correct, please mention it in the body.
    • Done.
  • You have to mention his eye and skin color (in the p&T), otherwise this would be infobox-exclusive.
    • Done.
  • Denal-Zon was a male, Zabrak police officer with the Coruscant Security Force who attained the rank of Captain by the time of the Cold War between the Galactic Republic and the resurgent Sith Empire.: What's the reason for the comma?
    • Hm, the reason... ID-10T error? or PEBKAC: Problem Exists Between Keyboard and Chair? Removed. ;)
  • A little bit more info about his investigation is needed in the intro.
    • Done.
  • Can you elaborate it a little bit more clearer that he served the Republic.
    • Same with Nidaljo, these guys are planetary cops and while Coruscant is a part of the greater Republic, according to the game codex, the CSF is a separate planetary organization so the cops don't work directly for the Republic, just with it.
  • Context for the Guild and the Market.
    • Done.
  • You should mention to whom he spoke in the quotes.
    • Done.
  • You need to add a first appearence tag.
    • Done.
  • More to come eventually. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:29, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Is it really said that Coruscant is his homeworld? Sorry for repeating this, but I just want to be sure.
    • Yep, its the homeworld. Same with Nidaljo. And I did link "homeworld" to the article homeworld to clarify.
  • Do we know who voiced him?
    • Nope, I looked.
  • Is there a link for the Republic indiviual (e.g. Hero of Tython) or is it possible to be a soldier, Jedi or smuggler?
    • Nidaljo is Jedi Knight specific, but Denal-Zon is for every Republic character. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:58, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • That's all. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:22, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • The ending of the bio is bracketed by "light side option" markers. Since I'm not playing TOR, I have to ask - is the quest open to dark side affiliated players at all? You mention the possibility of gaining dark side points in the BTS. If so, then marking it as a light side assumption would be incorrect. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:13, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
    • I can answer that - yes, the mission can be accepted by either light side-affiliated or dark side-affiliated players. You get it from Heerimus, just outside the Market taxi, and the dark side option of the quest is to give the collars to Senator Barc on the second level of the Senate Tower. Sorry if I'm stealing Coruscantfan's thunder, I just hope this article goes through :) —Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 14:23, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
    • Yes and no. As Cade Calrayn stated, you can choose the dark side option at the end of any quest in the game, but Empire (i.e. dark side affiliated) players cannot enter Coruscant (a Republic i.e. light side affiliated planet) so they can't play this mission or any other mission on Coruscant. Also, as to the light side v. dark side assumption, it has been accepted that for Jedi/Smuggler/Trooper quests the light side dialogue option is presumed canon, while for Sith/Bounty Hunter/Agent quests it is the dark side dialogue option. (See consensus track forum.) Coruscantfan (Talk) 15:15, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
      • Oh, I thought that was implied... Sorry, I should have realized that Cav might not have known those. —Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:51, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
        • No problem. :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:54, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
          • I'm aware of the outcome of the forum discussion regarding light side affiliated classes = light side canon choices. My main concern was that Imperial (dark side) players could attempt this quest, thereby rendering the assumption of a light side canon as erroneous. However, since that appears to not be an option in any case, there is no problem :) - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:46, March 29, 2012 (UTC)
            • Ah, I see. Thanks for the review! :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 02:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

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