Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Daysar

Daysar

• Nominated by: RocketLaunchJr (talk) 01:23, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Daysar is so fat and satisfied
• Word count at nomination time: 671 words (169 introduction, 465 body, 37 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB

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Support votes

1. See my copy-edit for some things to avoid in the future. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 21:25, 15 November 2025 (UTC)
2. StarWarsFan327^Talk 12:48, 23 November 2025 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:39, 2 December 2025 (UTC)

Objections

BRAHA'TOK, SYNTHETIC BRAHA'TOK, BRAHA'TOK ALTERNATIVES

• Bio quote is quite long, I think half of that is enough. And it allows for a quote to be used elsewhere too.
  • How should I split it? it's kind of difficult to do since the second half kind of requires the first half for context RocketLaunchJr1 ^{Ever been to Ghorman?} 08:09, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
    • How does it look now? RocketLaunchJr1 ^{Ever been to Ghorman?} 02:03, 19 September 2025 (UTC)
• The second bio paragraph is also a bit big and could probably be bisected. I wouldn't be opposed to the bio itself being split into two sub-sections in some way or another.
  • How does it look now? RocketLaunchJr1 (talk) 02:13, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
• "During the reign of the Galactic Empire, Daysar served in the Imperial Military's Naval branch, reaching the rank of lieutenant." Lieutenant? (This has also led to one of two duplicate links I'm seeing, there's a good tool you can turn on with preferences that helps with this)
  • Thanks for catching this, IDK how I missed that lol. May I ask what the other duplicate link is? RocketLaunchJr (talk) 10:39, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
    • Caught the other duplicate link RocketLaunchJr1 ^{calibrating enthusiasm...} 09:42, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
• "When ISB Major Lio Partagaz questioned the process of the kalkite extraction, to which an engineer officer stated that the process would provide "stark challenges" to the local population." This sentence feels like half a sentence, was the next one meant to be a continuation?
  • Fixed. To answer your question on how it was made, there used to be a longer sentence there but it was repetitive so I removed it. RocketLaunchJr1 (talk) 00:24, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
• "During this time, the admiral took some treats for themself while questioning ISB lieutenant Moy on the lack of methods of repopulation such as staged plagues or natural disasters" I think "repopulation tactics" is a too generalised way to put this, I'd moreso focus on the fact he was just suggesting new ideas than questioning the lack of anything. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:15, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
  • Fixed RocketLaunchJr1 (talk) 02:13, 18 September 2025 (UTC)

Stakeout

• Is his name mentioned out loud in the episode? If not you might want to note in the BtS that his name was revealed in the credits. Stake black ^msg 00:43, 18 September 2025 (UTC)

Lew

• In the infobox, you can put Imperial Navy's officer corps instead of just Imperial Navy Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
• Admiral really shouldn't be capitalised unless it's in front of a name, so the capitalised cases should be tweaked Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
• Dedra being put in charge of the project and it beginning is not really citable to "One Year Later" Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
• The airdate is not citable to the episode, and I would suggest moving the air date to after you mention the episode name and season details since that's typically how we do it. You can cite it to Andor Season 2 Companion, though Lewisr (talk) 23:12, 18 October 2025 (UTC)

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