- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Dark Jedi uprising
- Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 11:48, December 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A bit of forgotten canon.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:03, December 28, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 09:01, January 2, 2014 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:41, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
Winterz (talk) 01:08, January 15, 2014 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:50, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
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Winterz
I'm probably being too picky but since it's a conjectural name you shouldn't treat it as such when you introduce it in the intro. My suggestion would be a change to "An uprising of Dark Jedi" (or within such lines) only with the uprising bolded.Winterz (talk) 21:22, January 4, 2014 (UTC)- All right then, it's been changed. ;-) --LelalMekha (talk) 18:31, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
This article will need to adhere to the conflict layout.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:11, January 13, 2014 (UTC)- I divided the "history" section into "the insurrection" and "aftermath." Do you think it also needs a "prelude" section? The content is quite scarce, and not all conflict GAs have a "prelude" section—see Unidentified space battle (Saesee Tiin), for example. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:05, January 13, 2014 (UTC)
- You don't need to force a Prelude if there's no info. I would just recommend titling the second section "The uprising" rather than "insurrection." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:08, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 00:20, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
- You don't need to force a Prelude if there's no info. I would just recommend titling the second section "The uprising" rather than "insurrection." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:08, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
- I divided the "history" section into "the insurrection" and "aftermath." Do you think it also needs a "prelude" section? The content is quite scarce, and not all conflict GAs have a "prelude" section—see Unidentified space battle (Saesee Tiin), for example. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:05, January 13, 2014 (UTC)
Additionally, since there is no other article competing for the title Dark Jedi uprising, the parenthetical descriptor in this article title is unnecessary. This article should be moved to that title.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:21, January 13, 2014 (UTC)- Article renamed. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:05, January 13, 2014 (UTC)
Whenever I see the word "Unknown" in an article, it's a knee-jerk reaction for me to question whether the source literally states that or if its our own invention. In this case, the infobox's "Commanders" field. If it's the latter, that should just be removed.- Yes, this is a bad habit I can't seem to get rid of. I probably couldn't bear having the "commander" field of one side filled and the other not. Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:03, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
The intro capitalizes "Naboo Crisis" as a proper noun. Is that indeed a canonical name for the event?- I seemed to remember it was a canonical name, but I can't find the source. Accordingly, I changed the name to "Subjugation of Naboo," per Star Wars: Galactic Battlegrounds. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:03, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Very nice job overall. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:29, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:03, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:54, January 16, 2014 (UTC)