Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Danyawarra

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Danyawarra

• Nominated by: Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 09:04, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This article is so much longer than the canon we have about them (189 words, I counted them).
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Support

1. Samonic ^(Talk) 12:53, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:26, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:11, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 21:26, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 12:34, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Can you introduce an image? This picture of Danyawarra's clones, maybe?
• Please add the 101st regiment to the affiliations. Samonic ^(Talk) 15:47, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Done! Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 10:46, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
    • The regiment should be a sub-bullet of Galactic Republic. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:21, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
      • Oops, fixed! Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 11:23, 19 September 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• After checking the source, this sentence feels pretty extrapalotory: "After graduating from the Order's academy, Danyawarra was selected as a Padawan learner by Jedi Master Ludwin Katarkus." You may want to reword it to avoid any speculation. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:32, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Thank you, done! Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 08:39, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Please clarify that the Jedi Temple is on Coruscant, since there are multiple temples in the galaxy. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:17, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Done! Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 13:30, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
    • It doesn't look like the source directly supports the location. Also context for Coruscant itself. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:52, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
      • The source says they left for the mission from Coruscant, and if it was supposed to be a different temple they'd mention it, no? Also, what context do you want for Coruscant itself? Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 14:03, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
        • That it's a planet. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:21, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
          • Done. Also, should I mention that the ship arrived on Virgillia 7? Technically the only evidence we have for that is that when Ventor is rescued, he's rescued from Virgillia 7, and it seems unlikely that he would be able to move between planets but not leave the system. I'm not sure whether that's strong enough to include though, what do you think? Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 18:00, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
            • I'm not familiar with the source material so that's your call to make. Also, I've taken the liberty of providing another source for Coruscant's context since HNN doesn't support it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:48, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
              • Thank you! Also I entirely forgot that SkyeWalkers says explicitly the mission was to Virgillia 7, so that's edited in, oops. How's that for the intro, also? Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 13:30, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
• Would like to see the intro expanded with a bit more detail on their mission. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:48, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:34, 4 December 2022 (UTC)