- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
D'ian
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:16, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Wanted to try a Corporate sector world, others may follow
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:49, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 12:24, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
Cade 
Calrayn 22:57, May 10, 2014 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:45, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
- 501st dogma(talk) 23:58, May 15, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
D'ian was a planet with balmy weather and shallow seas, which located within the: Something missing here, right?- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:34, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
By the time of the Clone Wars between the Galactic Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems, the planet was considered a part of Republic space: I'm not sure, but should this be "considered to be a part of..."?- I think its fine either way, but changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:34, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Could you reword the stuff about the Confederation and the population in 25 ABY to make it more chronolized? Now it sounds like the Second Galactic Civil War started sometime before or in 25 ABY.- Added dates to make it clearer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:34, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Was the planet mentioned in Agent of the Empire—Iron Eclipse, Part 1?- Nope, Cross just said something like An Orchard Vine from the Corporate Sector if I'm not mistake. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:34, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
AFAIK, the affiliations in the infobox should in chronological order and not in alphabetical.- Oh, that does make more sense. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:34, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
- Nice. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:27, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks! Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:34, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
Winterz's retreat
May I ask why do you use one ref for the "region" and "sector" fields of the infobox but then a different ref when describing them in the body? You could probably fix that, only to make it more consistent.Winterz (talk) 23:41, April 6, 2014 (UTC)- Oops, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
Cav
Can we get some dates thrown in there for the Clone Wars, rise of the Empire, etc?- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
A little explanation of the CSA itself would be appreciated.- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
Population info needs to be in the infobox as well.- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 19:55, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
- Given that its only an average for the region I'm not sure it should be included there. In fact I'm pretty sure I've seen people told to remove the Atlas averages from infoboxes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
It didn't actually appear in the Atlas. I'd say "D'ian was first mentioned in The Essential Atlas, a sourcebook written by Daniel Wallace and Jason Fry and released in 2009. It received a short summary in the section on the Corporate Sector, and also appeared on a map of the region."- Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
Please specify when the Corporate Sector was founded in the intro.- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
Is "Orchard vine" capitalized?- I annoyingly don't have access to my copy at the moment so I can't check. As soon as I do I'll correct it if necessary. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Well, you decapitalize it in its own CA. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:46, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Nice catch! Thanks man. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:03, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Well, you decapitalize it in its own CA. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:46, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- I annoyingly don't have access to my copy at the moment so I can't check. As soon as I do I'll correct it if necessary. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
You make no mention of the Morellian Trail, the pre-existing hyperroute that was one of the Hydian Way's components. Also, because the Trail runs through D'ian, it had to be discovered by at least 3704 BBY, when Kallea joined the Trail with the Spurs of Celanon.- Added, and will add proper page number referencing once I have access to the Atlas. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Page 138. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:09, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks again for the help. Seems that the current reference is actually find then. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:12, May 8, 2014 (UTC)
- Page 138. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:09, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Added, and will add proper page number referencing once I have access to the Atlas. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
The planet itself isn't really a junction; it's the D'ian system.- Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
Both words of Corporate Sector should be capitalized. Cade Calrayn 21:02, April 22, 2014 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:38, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:22, May 16, 2014 (UTC)