- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Cyborg slicers of Yirt-4138-Grek-12
- Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 23:36, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Stealing from Argente was a baaad idea.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 16:30, April 10, 2011 (UTC)- QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 10:47, April 20, 2011 (UTC) - Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 13:16, April 26, 2011 (UTC) - --Eyrezer 10:56, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 20:20, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Return of the PIE
Give some context to the Separatist Crisis in the History section.- Technically, this team doesn't have anything to do with the crisis. There is no evidence that they were a political faction involved in the crisis or anything. The only reason I mentioned the crisis in the article is because they were operating at that time. So giving information on the crisis in this article seems a bit pointless to me. Kreivi Wolter 16:18, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
- Fair enough
- Technically, this team doesn't have anything to do with the crisis. There is no evidence that they were a political faction involved in the crisis or anything. The only reason I mentioned the crisis in the article is because they were operating at that time. So giving information on the crisis in this article seems a bit pointless to me. Kreivi Wolter 16:18, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
I was reading the HoloNet News article, and it doesn't say that the agents "voluntary" underwent surgery. For all we know, they could have been forced to.- Roger roger. Kreivi Wolter 16:18, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
- That's all I've got, nice job. Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 22:02, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
Context needed on the Corporate Alliance in the intro and the history, as well as on the Republic under "Organization."- Please clarify a little what did you have in mind. Kreivi Wolter 21:19, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
- Any context would do. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 03:40, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Not really sure tis a valid objection, but what the h*ll. Adressed. Kreivi Wolter 15:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Missing something in a previous nomination does not make an objection invalid. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 23:26, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Missing something in a previous nomination does not make an objection invalid. Grand Moff Tranner
- Not really sure tis a valid objection, but what the h*ll. Adressed. Kreivi Wolter 15:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Any context would do. Grand Moff Tranner
- Please clarify a little what did you have in mind. Kreivi Wolter 21:19, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
"The agents used these objects to steal valuable data from the data-stores of the Corporate Alliance." - what "objects" are you referring to here?- Changed. Kreivi Wolter 21:19, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
- It's still unclear what these "supplies" are supposed to be in the first place. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 03:40, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Kreivi Wolter 15:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
- It's still unclear what these "supplies" are supposed to be in the first place. Grand Moff Tranner
- Changed. Kreivi Wolter 21:19, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
How exactly can pressurization be "shattered?"- Changed. Kreivi Wolter 21:19, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
- That's all for now. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 14:11, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
Cav
supplying them by building vessels - some more context is needed here. Do you mean vessels as in starships, or vessels as in the "vessel-drive" mentioned in the following sentence.- Might as well change it. Done. Kreivi Wolter 14:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
performing cybernetic surgeries on them to aid in their theft of valuable data from the data-stores of the Corporate Alliance - any information on what type of surgeries were performed?- Unfortunatly, no. Kreivi Wolter 14:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
What is a "vessel drive"?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:54, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
- The source only mentions it briefly, no context, other than that already is in the article, is given. Kreivi Wolter 14:23, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:20, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Last time I forget to give credit for those who deserved it; many thanks for Borsk Fey'lya for checking The Official Star Wars Fact File 91 for me. Kreivi Wolter 23:36, March 26, 2011 (UTC)