Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Crucival transmitter tower

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Crucival transmitter tower

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:16, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More Crucival lore
• Date Archived: 08:50, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 385 words (108 introduction, 262 body, 15 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 00:02, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:32, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 15:35, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:59, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, 21 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• I'm not sure if it's just me, but there's something about the following sentence that doesn't quite make sense. 'In 1 BBY, the Rebel Alliance's 61st Mobile Infantry went to attack the transmitter tower, the Empire's forces there enlisting Crucival residents to help protect them'. Lewisr (talk) 20:44, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Gave it a slight tweak. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:22, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
    • I should have specified that I meant in the intro, the instance you changed in the body was actually fine haha! My apologies for the mix up Lewisr (talk) 18:58, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
      • Added a couple things but otherwise think it's fine. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:16, 19 July 2023 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• The soldier that talks with Namir has enough dialogue to merit an article, I'd say. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:49, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:35, 20 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:49, 21 July 2023 (UTC)