Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Crisp-E-O donut droid

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Crisp-E-O donut droid

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 22:10, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: If this passes, it'll be my fiftieth GA. What better way to celebrate than with doughnuts?

(4 ACs/7 Users/11 Total)

Support

  1. Mmmm...doughnuts.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 12:41, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Curse you! I have now added "donuts" to my grocery list! :P Trak Nar Ramble on 05:30, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Now if only they add a beignet droid to canon. ~SavageBOB sig 14:42, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Congrats on number five-oh.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 19:53, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
  5. I love donuts <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 19:09, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:35, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote In the olden days, it would have been practically mandatory for you to take a topic this delightfully silly and Fourdot it up to twice this size.   XD   --Darth Culator (Talk) 14:16, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
  8. Love it! Now get to work on getting your 50th FA!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:45, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
  9. We need not use "fourdot" as a verb here Enochf 14:30, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
  10. 501st dogma(talk) 12:28, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
  11. ACvote Someone was vote farming... :P JangFett (Talk) 03:15, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Savaged…
  • "after selecting the most delicious." Most delicious what?
  • I'm not sure: should the affiliation be to the restaurants or to Dexter directly? With a droid, it's hard to say. What do you think?
  • Perhaps a couple words of context on what "fifth-degree" means?
  • The "History" seems appropriate for an article on Dex's Crisp-E-O, but perhaps not so much for an article on the droid model itself. Maybe pare it down a bit to talk less about Dex's struggles and court settlement, etc., to simply mention that Dex had one of these and it followed him from one business to the next? Other than that, looks great. ~SavageBOB sig 14:02, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:15, June 10, 2012 (UTC)