Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Corvis

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Corvis

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 18:26, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 17:11, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 339 words (44 introduction, 249 body, 46 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 294 words (44 introduction, 200 body, 50 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Outer Shell Electrons (talk) 21:16, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 01:01, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
3. Nicely written. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:46, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 05:37, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 17:06, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Thrawn

• Homeworld is infobox exclusive. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 19:10, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Wok142 (talk) 22:48, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

ecks

• Is there any downside to cropping the infobox image a bit more vertically? You could probably get rid of like 90% of the empty bubble.
• Two of the three intro sentences have their main clause start with "Corvus flew", could you please reword for some variation?
• Review note: "towards" is informal, "toward" is formal writing. I've corrected the instances in this article but keep this in mind for the future.
• The two last sentences of the bio both involve clones making their way "toward the city", some rewriting is needed here to avoid repetition. Xd1358 ^(Talk) 18:49, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Should be all corrected. Wok142 (talk) 21:56, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 00:44, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• I think a brief mention of the mission's outcome would be worth adding Lewisr (talk) 02:06, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
• Since Corvis' armor is slightly different, I think it'd be worth briefly noting what is different Lewisr (talk) 02:06, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
• Publisher for the comic should be added Lewisr (talk) 02:06, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed all. Wok142 (talk) 23:12, 8 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:10, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strike objection (AC only)

1. For ecks, has been 19 days, and ecks is away curently Lewisr (talk) 19:28, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 19:51, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:44, 15 August 2024 (UTC)