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Clip beetle

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 18:21, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another barn burner nom!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:02, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:55, February 7, 2014 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 21:25, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:48, February 14, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Winterz (talk) 19:56, February 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • Could you mention who wrote each of the other novels.
    • There you go. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 00:07, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Otherwise good job! Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • "The clip beetle's habitat consisted of either jungles, swamps, or hills." I think that this could be worded better, since the way it is currently worded makes it sound like it is only one of the three, when note makes it sound like it could be any combination of the three.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:58, January 18, 2014 (UTC)
    • How's that? 501st dogma(talk) 00:52, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • This is nothing more than speculation. Since there's really no succinct way of presenting this factually in the infobox, you should just cut this and save it for the body: "Jungles, swamps, and/or hills"
    • Changed.
  • May I ask why you use "Mon Cala" here and not "Mon Calamari"? "clip beetle flesh tasted like Mon Cala ice-lobster."
    • Traitor has it as Mon Cala, so I did it that way.
  • Again, going along with the first objection, this is nothing more than speculation. You can write this factually by saying that it survived in the Nursery, the environment of which included jungles, swamps, and hills," then leave it up to the reader to draw his own conclusion: "The clip beetle's habitat consisted of jungles, swamps, and/or hills."
  • Is there no article to pipelink into the mention of the Vong capturing Coruscant from the New Republic? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:04, February 13, 2014 (UTC)
    • Pipelinked the correct article. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 00:38, February 14, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:56, February 16, 2014 (UTC)