- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Chief gunnery officer
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:37, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: "There goes another one."
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 21:17, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:06, January 3, 2013 (UTC)- —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:36, January 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Dat hair style on Hija. Total seventies. I'm sure the Empire loved the seventies.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 16:25, January 8, 2013 (UTC) 
Assuming Cav's satisfaction. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:10, January 8, 2013 (UTC)- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:28, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Cav
Chief gunnery officer was a commission on the Star Destroyers of the Galactic Empire's Navy, - "commission" gives the impression that the post is an actual military rank, not an assignment as stated in the intro.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:43, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:31, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:28, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
- The long-absent Darth Morrt did most of the work for this article. As such, he deserves most of the credit. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:37, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Is it really nescessary to have a notable members section when there's only one notable member? Most of the info from that section could probably be better in a history section, and what's in the history section currently would prbably be better as a description section. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 09:34, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:58, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
- The history section now is basically just the intro from Hija's article. You should try to change that section and make it more about what Hija did as a chief gunnery officer rather than Hija himself. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:17, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
- Added info about Hija's duties. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:16, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
- And I do believe the info is already only what is relevant to Hija as a chief gunnery officer, see for reference the fact the Gunnery captain article only mentions Bolvan's history during his time as a gunnery captain, and nothing else about his life. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:02, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Last thing, I'd remove the Hija subheading under in the history section, since there aren't any other subheadings there. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:18, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:37, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Last thing, I'd remove the Hija subheading under in the history section, since there aren't any other subheadings there. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:18, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
- And I do believe the info is already only what is relevant to Hija as a chief gunnery officer, see for reference the fact the Gunnery captain article only mentions Bolvan's history during his time as a gunnery captain, and nothing else about his life. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:02, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Added info about Hija's duties. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:16, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
- The history section now is basically just the intro from Hija's article. You should try to change that section and make it more about what Hija did as a chief gunnery officer rather than Hija himself. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:17, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:58, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Is it really nescessary to have a notable members section when there's only one notable member? Most of the info from that section could probably be better in a history section, and what's in the history section currently would prbably be better as a description section. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 09:34, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
- On vacation from the 24th-31st. If any objections are given in that time period, I will respond after getting back. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:03, December 24, 2012 (UTC)