Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Checkbox

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Contents

  • 1 Checkbox
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 A check for Checkbox
        • 1.1.2.2 Checked the checkbox
        • 1.1.2.3 Vitus
        • 1.1.2.4 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.5 Ayrehead
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Checkbox

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:26, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: SE asked for it
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(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Check the checked checkbox! — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 12:12, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:33, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:11, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote I tweaked some wording a bit, let me know if it's cool! Supreme Emperor Holocomm 06:03, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:38, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:09, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

A check for Checkbox
  • What's the context for knowing Checkbox has a helmet? The Equipment section appears awfully skint so if there's a better way to introduce the helmet I'd highly recommend that. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:12, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • He leans against the box while listening in, and the story describes his helmet touching the box. I think including it in the bio will read a little play-by-play. What do you think? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:22, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
      • I'm unsure where else it would go, so I'll leave it to a more experienced reviewer to make the call if anyone sees fit. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:33, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
Checked the checkbox
  • "During the Clone Wars against the Confederacy of Independent Systems, Checkbox was stationed aboard the Arquitens-class light cruiser Stellar Rise.[2]"; could you establish the Galactic Republic fought againast the Confederacy of Independent Systems? — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 13:49, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I think it's clear that the Republic is the other side since that's who's discussed in the sentence prior. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:22, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
      • I don't think it is.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 20:29, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
        • Added to avoid arguing over this. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:03, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
Vitus
  • I think it'll be appropriate to clarify that Checkbox was sliced vertically --Vitus InfinitusTalk 17:33, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:25, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Would like to see the Clone Wars dates specified, since it gives us a range for the events of the story and therefore this character's death. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:35, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:48, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • In the infobox you have Checkbox's gender referenced to the story, but in the body it uses the reference note. Since the story actually specifies it, it should be sourced to that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:51, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed.
  • You should mention that he's a clone of Jango Fett. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:51, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:53, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:11, 10 June 2022 (UTC)