Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Celsor 3

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Celsor 3

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:05, February 27, 2020 (UTC)
  2. Fan26 (Talk) 21:15, March 12, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Redundant vote, I know, but I couldn't object and then not support. Zed42 (talk) 09:45, March 13, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:26, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:00, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 09:11, April 3, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • You're missing backup link(s). Fan26 (Talk) 14:47, March 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • Oops, it was due to a typo. Thanks to Zed42 for locating it. MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 05:05, March 12, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • The moon should be classified as terrestrial in the infobox and Description section.
  • Could you provide an approximate date for the events of Resistance? Zed42 (talk) 05:11, March 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • The jakoosk spending most of its time slumbering is currently exclusive to the intro, as is the mention of the First Order-Resistance war.
  • Several things need context in the intro: the Colossus, Warbird gang, as well as Kazuda and Torra.
  • Is there no quotes that can be used for the Description section?
  • "Resistance members Kazuda Xiono and Torra Doza, who had been monitoring the pirates…" I feel like "Resistance members" probably isn't the best description of Kazuda and Torra in this context. Either "Ace Squadron members" or simply "Colossus residents" would probably work better.
  • The mention of the concept art in the BTS should be sourced to the individual concept art gallery rather than the main episode guide page. Zed42 (talk) 07:56, March 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • There is no separate page for the concept art gallery, and therefor no separate link or title. MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique
      • Weird. It's not linked to the episode guide itself, but it definitely exists, albeit under an odd URL. Zed42 (talk) 03:26, March 13, 2020 (UTC)
        • That is very strange, but link adjusted either way! MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 08:52, March 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • All fixed. MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 21:13, March 12, 2020 (UTC)
Tommmy
  • Quite a lot of intro exclusive links: First Order military, hunting, spy, pilot, death. Based on this, I'd like to see the context mirrored between the intro and the body so these links are either used in both or removed. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 16:01, April 2, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:11, April 3, 2020 (UTC)