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Celly Organa
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:40, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Don't think I've ever done a couple nom before
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Support
- noice BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 21:12, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
LucaRoR
(Talk) 15:12, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
Nice work! Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:22, 21 December 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 23:46, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:52, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
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Spooky
Elder Houses is infobox-exclusive.—spookywillowwtalk 01:54, 16 November 2022 (UTC)- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:01, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
Luca
The Callista trilogy should be mentioned in the BTS.- Since that's not an official name and doesn't seem to even be an official trilogy I think it's best to not include it.
Is there no quote for "Biography?" I'm thinking about when they discuss politics.- Sure, added.
- I think the attribution should mention the fact that Celly was listening because, right now, the reader wouldn't understand how it is relevant to Celly. (I would have said it before, but I had completely removed that scene from my brain :P). LucaRoR
(Talk) 15:42, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
- Done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:59, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
- I think the attribution should mention the fact that Celly was listening because, right now, the reader wouldn't understand how it is relevant to Celly. (I would have said it before, but I had completely removed that scene from my brain :P). LucaRoR
- Sure, added.
I'd fix this in a copy-edit, but I wanted to hear your opinion first. What do you think about moving the image down? Because it is being pushed down by the info box right now.- Done.
An image cat should probably be added.- Yup.
Wouldn't Princess Leia: Royal Rebel be a {{1stm}}?LucaRoR
(Talk) 12:26, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
- Someone added that without notifying me - article has been updated. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:05, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- Lew alerted me to a couple other sources with info about Leia's aunts, so that info has been added; I included stuff that a) applied to the aunts collectively and not any single one, and b) the aunts had done, eg I didn't think it was needed to say "Leia thought her aunts would have been apalled." I also avoided assuming that Celly was on Alderaan when it exploded, though Leia thinks about her aunts when it happens. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:19, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
- Just want to add that there may be more mentions in supplementary sources like De Agostini but I myself am unable to investigate them currently. UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:52, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- Just want to add that there may be more mentions in supplementary sources like De Agostini but I myself am unable to investigate them currently. UberSoldat93
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:52, 21 January 2023 (UTC)