Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Camp Sagol

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Camp Sagol

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 22:17, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My entry in WP:VG's group project

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 23:25, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
2. Take a look at my changes. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:22, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
3. Good work on WP:VG's group project.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:33, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:48, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
5. No errors I can see Enochf 05:09, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:36, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
7. Cade Calrayn 18:44, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
8. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Object

501st

• Only one thing: "....and 2 laser turrets protected the camp. Four power cores provided power to the base's buildings. A network of additional laser turrets was spread throughout the area." Try to put the laser turret parts together, not seperated by the power core sentence.
  • Ah yes, adjusted. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 23:06, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
• Great work on WP:VG. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 22:29, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lee's charge

• Give a little bit context in the intro for the Battle of Yavin. Otherwise, we have no idea when the battle took place.
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 21:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
• On whose side where the two cities threatened by the camp? Who fought in the Battle of Krant.
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 21:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
• Context for Dewbacks.
  • Too much, too little? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 21:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
• Good job. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 08:40, April 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • Why thank you. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 21:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Currently the introduction doesn't have a whole lot to do with Camp Sagol. Could you perhaps add something to the second sentence saying that there were forces coming from there?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:12, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the advice. How's that? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 15:33, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
    • Exactly what I was looking for.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:36, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

1. Really, the only applicable quote just says that there are two camps in the area. Would it be worth it to add? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 22:17, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
   • It seems like it would be worth it to me.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:26, June 1, 2012 (UTC)