- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Callan Grayne
- Nominated by: Cade Calrayn
21:49, March 15, 2013 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Project Hero
(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:50, March 19, 2013 (UTC)- Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 21:29, March 20, 2013 (UTC) - grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 11:11, March 23, 2013 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 16:27, March 23, 2013 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:15, March 23, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Attack of the Clone
The capitalization of "Republic Military" vs. "Republic military" (and to some extent, just "military" vs. "Military") throughout the article isn't always consistent. If there's a reason for this, that's fine, but it isn't immediately clear. Please check.- Nah, just a typo. Fixed.
What is the nature of the battle on Hoth? If it was ground warfare, that should be linked somewhere.- Done.
The link of "a squad" toward the beginning of the Bio is the only time that "a"/"an" is included within a link; otherwise other instances omit it. Please check for consistency.- Done.
"as long as he received something in return": can this be clarified a bit more? I assume you mean "something in return" in regards to military objectives (I help you, you help me), but it's a bit open to interpretation (i.e. bribes, greed, etc.) the way it's stated right now.CC7567 (talk) 16:19, March 23, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
It's not necessary to repeat species and gender in both the Bio and P/T. I'd prefer to see one removed.- Done.
- I capitalized "Military" in use of "the Military" when referring to the Republic Military proper. I'm not sure what the canon precedent for this is, if any. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:09, March 23, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:15, March 23, 2013 (UTC)