Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Cal Alder/Legends

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Cal Alder

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  1. Kind of short, but...that's all there is. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:51, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. A quick read. Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 03:47, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. I think it's definitely safe to say you've included all there is to know about Mr. Alder. Back when I collected CCG, Cal was the very first card I ever got, so I have a soft spot for the guy. lol --Colinmcev 05:27, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
  4. The "most noms for one source" award goes to...Toprawa and Ralltiir! Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:22, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
  5. Graestan(Talk) 12:15, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
    • Again, "in service to" doesn't sit right with me, somehow.
      • Reworded.
    • "Cal Alder was a lieutenant and highly trained, expert scout of the Alliance to Restore the Republic." – Lieutenant isn't really an adjective here.
      • Reordered.
    • Is the Battle of Nentan only mentioned in that one source, that you know of? If so, that would be an easy redlink.
      • Actually, Nentan is described in pretty good detail in Galaxy Guide 3 for Derlin and Carlist Rieekan's involvement. It's actually on my list of things to do, so I'll try to get around to that.
    • "His expertise in terrain scouting and native creatures impressed Derlin and made him among the first to arrive at the base." – Clarify whom you are speaking of.
      • Reworded
    • Is this the person to whom Han is speaking when he says "Deck Officer…" ? If not, please note in the BtS who that was, for the film's credits seem to cause some confusion.
    • I'm loving these little noms about the soldiers. Graestan(Talk) 03:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

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