- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Cal Alder
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: As my TPM stuff is on hold, time for an ESB project to celebrate the 40 year anniversary!
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Well done. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:56, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- RattsT (talk) 03:58, January 25, 2020 (UTC)
Fantastic work. Master
Fredcerique 02:56, February 5, 2020 (UTC)- Cal Jedi. Gone but never forgotten. 1358 (Talk) 20:17, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
Tommy Macaroni 20:42, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
You should add Kal'Shebbol's location, the Outer Rim, and source it to The Force Awakens Beginner Game.- Sure, done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:53, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
Link to the original trilogy in the BTS needs to be fixed.UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:01, January 24, 2020 (UTC)- Lol, oops. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:53, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
Ratts
The paragraph about the shield doors should be moved to the end of the "Missing rebels" subsection.RattsT (talk) 20:43, January 24, 2020 (UTC)- Aesthetically the current split works a lot better than a 3-1 paragraph split and allows the image placement to work. I can change the heading of the second subsection if you'd prefer but I think the current layout should stay. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:24, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- I agree on the aesthetic argument, but the paragraph has little to do with the Battle of Hoth as the subsection says. I'd suggest just getting rid of the subsections entirely and moving the quote to the beginning of the bio. RattsT (talk) 23:36, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- An article should be subsectioned if it's longer than three paragraphs, but I've changed the heading of the second subsection. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:42, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- I agree on the aesthetic argument, but the paragraph has little to do with the Battle of Hoth as the subsection says. I'd suggest just getting rid of the subsections entirely and moving the quote to the beginning of the bio. RattsT (talk) 23:36, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
- Aesthetically the current split works a lot better than a 3-1 paragraph split and allows the image placement to work. I can change the heading of the second subsection if you'd prefer but I think the current layout should stay. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:24, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky
The link for the 'Filming' BtS quote seems to be linked to the intermediary /save/ url screen, not a definitive save (from looking at the url); which also makes it not open on Mac browsers, if you could take a look.—spookywillowwtalk 17:56, February 4, 2020 (UTC)- Huh, must have copied it from the address bar too early I guess. Should be fixed now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:00, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
Star Wars Costumes: The Original Trilogy has some neat information on the costume development of the rebel officers; pointing to the ensemble Alder's wearing in his scenes as designed by John Mollo, which might be fun to put in if possible.—spookywillowwtalk 19:05, February 15, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:42, February 24, 2020 (UTC)