Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Caitken

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Caitken

Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:50, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Is it an awful idea to do a GAN while finals are making me stressed? Probably.

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Solid article, nicely done. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 19:40, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Objections handled via Discord. MasterFred(talk) 18:57, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
Still can't figure out the difference between Caitken and Shollan. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 19:08, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
- Shollan is the one Raddus calls "Lieutenant" in the film. :) JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:16, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
VergenceScatter (talk) 20:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
The Mon Cala enthusiast nomming more Mon Calamari? Epic. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:09, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 20:02, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

~~I'm not sure if following orders is a "Skill or ablity," moreso a character trait.~~ AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:12, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
- His willingness to follow orders is a character trait, but efficiency can go in that section.
~~In this image, Caitken is using a device. Does it have a name? If so, add it to the "Equipment" section.~~ AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:16, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
- That's part of the Profundity and also not really visible enough to ID. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:33, 21 May 2021 (UTC)

~~Full release dates required for the film and the blog post in the BTS.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:31, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
~~Some sources you'll want to investigate: These, everything here, and anything from Insider.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:37, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
- Dates added. Most of the multimedia and trailers have been checked, but I found one more TV spot and will check the last couple magazines as well as Insider. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:44, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
- Finished checking. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:25, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
~~Now you need to clear the redlinks.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:31, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, was planning on doing those today. Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:25, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

~~Perhaps the equipment section could use some work? I think that the article could benefit from a more thorough description of his clothing. Other than that, it's definitely worthy of the nomination.~~ EthSch13 (talk) 00:04, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for saying so. I have added a bit more detail on the uniform, not sure if there's anything else you had in mind. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:18, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
  - Nice, yeah that's definitely an improvement. I can't really think of anything else that would be worth adding, so it seems good to me! EthSch13 (talk) 00:24, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
    - Great. Feel free to strike your objection (*<s>Objection</s>) if you're satisfied. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:46, 25 May 2021 (UTC)

~~It seems unnecessary to state that he's not Force-sensitive.~~
- There's precedent in Jeremoch Colton and Pharl McQuarrie/Legends.
  - Still seems unnecessary, but okay.
~~If you disagree with this, it's fine, but I personally don't believe that you start a section with just "he."~~ VergenceScatter (talk) 04:36, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
- I did that to try to introduce some variation in all of the non-bio sections starting with "Caitken was" or "Caitken wore," but if you'd really like me to switch it up that's fine. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:29, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
  - Nah, it's up to you. VergenceScatter (talk) 23:50, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

~~"During the battle, he informed Raddus of approaching enemy fighters as well as their effect on the deflector shields." Is he referencing the shield gate or their ships shields?~~ Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 17:09, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Preliminary objection: parts of the article have way too much context that isn't relevant to the subject. I'll go through the article thorougly later, but I recommend you go through it once as well and see if there's anything that isn't important. For instance, the two last intro sentences can be merged; you don't need to identify the Star Destroyer, let alone its class, in the intro. Just say that the Profundity was destroyed by a Star Destroyer as it attempted to retreat. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
- I've tried to cut down on some of the info that isn't at all relevant to the article subject, let me know if there were other extraneous bits you noticed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:15, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
~~I'd recommend you find a more interesting title for the first bio subsection; having both sections named something Scarif is kind of boring. Maybe something like "Aide to the admiral" or whatever.~~
- Replaced with that.
~~You need to mention in the bio that the Alliance Fleet entered hyperspace to join Erso et al at Scarif. I'd do it myself but I'm not sure if it can be sourced to RO5.~~ 1358 ^(Talk) 10:44, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
- It can, done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:49, 13 July 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:02, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

I will be away for the next two weeks and therefore not he able to address objections; feel free to list them, but I'm asking the AgriCorps not to take down this nom. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC)