Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/C2-B5

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C2-B5

• Nominated by: Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:50, September 1, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The illegitimate child of Constable Zuvio and BB-9E.

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:50, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:19, September 28, 2018 (UTC)
3. AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 17:29, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:01, October 25, 2018 (UTC)
5. Tommy Macaroni 21:48, October 28, 2018 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:31, November 2, 2018 (UTC)
7. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:17, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• The tense isn't really suitable in that first image caption, and a crew by definition is a group of people, so Jyn can't be described as being disguised as one. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:08, September 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • How does it look now? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:11, September 2, 2018 (UTC)
• I think the Bts should describe this droid's role in Battlefront more clearly, just with something simple like how its abilities can all be used to help the player. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:39, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:49, September 26, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• You should be linking to the most specific page upon first mention, even if that's a pipelink. For this article, any mention of droid in relation to C2 should go R2 series astromech droid, Astromech droid, Droid. For example, "The droid was frequently" in the intro should link to Astromech droid, not Droid. Please correct this and check the article for any other cases of this. Tommy Macaroni 17:53, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:44, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

QGJ

• The first two sentences of the characteristics section don't really flow too well. I think it's better to establish the droid's class and line, then describe its dimensions, then talk about sensor color and all the other stuff.
  • Is it better now? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:42, September 28, 2018 (UTC)
• Have you checked Star Wars: Rogue One Graphic Novel Adaptation for a possible appearance?
  • Yep. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:43, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
• I'd like the Bts to be restructured chronologically, so that his appearance in the film comes after his BF appearance.
  • How does that look? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:55, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
• Seeing as most droids in the Star Wars universe have a distinct masculine or feminine personality, and this one's unknown, I have added the category Category:Individuals of unspecified gender. I would like to hear your opinion on whether this category is warranted or not. If you think that it is, then it should be reflected somewhere in the article as well. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:17, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • I had the same question when I was about to promote the article for GA, and looked for other status articles about droids of unspecified programming gender. None of them had the category, so I leave the decision to you. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:43, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'll leave it in for now. If other reviewers will ask you to remove it, I don't mind. I'm kinda iffy on the subject, myself, but I'm leaning towards including it, for now. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:19, September 28, 2018 (UTC)

Imp

• The last sentence of BTS would be a far better fit at the end of the first paragraph of BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:41, October 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • It originally was, but I had moved it after QuiGonJinn's objection that BTS be restructured chronologically. I've just reverted my edit. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:04, October 2, 2018 (UTC)
• Equipment and the last paragraph of BTS are a bit too similarly worded, try rephrasing some. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:40, October 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • How does it look? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:27, October 25, 2018 (UTC)
• I'd like to see a release date for the {{1st}}. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:40, October 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:27, October 25, 2018 (UTC)

AV

• According to the webpage for C2-B5's Sideshow Collectibles figure, this droid's plating has a "gunmetal base with matte black and silver accent panels". This seems more precise than what the article currently has: black, with gray accent panels".
  • Oh, I saw that more of an out-of-universe thing, but I can add them if you think otherwise. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:21, October 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • On second thought, you are right. It is added now. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:27, October 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • You'll need to update the infobox and intro with this info as well. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:56, October 17, 2018 (UTC)
      • How does that look? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:57, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
        • I'm not sure wether the "unique" part was meant to be taken as an in-universe statement that not other droid has gunmetal plating, so I'd probalby drop that. Also, I think the intro looks a little cluttered with the physical description now, whereas before it was just "black-plated", so I'd maybe cut that too. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:47, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
          • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:26, October 18, 2018 (UTC)
• Per Tope's objection here, I don't think it's necessary to include that C2-B5 was a second class droid outside of the infobox. Simply mentioning that it was an astromech droid should suffice. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:49, October 17, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:21, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• "The astromech also had another indicator on the back of the dome in switching yellow and green colors." I'm not sure what this sentence is supposed to mean. "...in switching..." may be the wrong wording. MasterFred^(Whatever) 18:12, October 25, 2018 (UTC)
  • How does it look now? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:23, October 25, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• 0.93 meters should be spelled out as ninety-three centimeters. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:46, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:58, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
• I'm not sure the third leg should be included in the infobox, I don't think legs are really equipment. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:46, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • Removed from the infobox. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:58, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
• Shouldn't the first mentioned for the reel be a first pictured? It's not actually spoken about anywhere in the video is it? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:46, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • It doesn't speak or whatsoever, but isn't {{1stp}} used for a subject's first depiction after its first appearance? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:58, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  • I guess {{1stp}} can be used before {{1st}}, changed now. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:46, November 2, 2018 (UTC)
• Could you change the Droid Factory link to the Jedi Temple page rather than the Disney Blog. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:20, November 3, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:03, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Toprawa

• In the Characteristics, I'd rather see the article present exactly what the original source says rather than converting to a different measurement unit. Just say 0.93 meters tall.
  • Done.
• This sentence is literally saying that its deflector shield generator was capable of deploying toxic dioxis gas, which I don't think is what you're trying to convey here. Please reword: "The astromech C2-B5 was equipped with a deflector shield generator[5] capable of deploying a large personal energy shield[10] as well as toxic dioxis gas that could be released to neutralize opponents." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:56, November 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • How does it look? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:09, November 2, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

• As this character is a droid, I do not believe it to be necessary for them to be included in the Category:Individuals of unspecified gender category. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:49, October 17, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:21, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:17, November 3, 2018 (UTC)