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Burque

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:00, July 28, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Surprisingly the character called berk doesn't do anything stupid

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Nice work! --Boot Lover/Riverdale Chauffeur (Wanna Discuss Something?) 16:35, August 4, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:46, August 11, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Captain ABQ. Imperators II(Talk) 18:05, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 18:40, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
  5. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:42, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Riverdale
Tommy
  • "an Imperial construction project called Sentinel Base." Sentinel Base isn't a construction project. It's a base who's purpose it is to oversee the construction of the Death Star (project stardust).
  • "where Sentinel Base was built" This reads a bit odd, could you just say located instead?
  • Imperial Officer Corps is infobox exclusive. Furthermore, that organisation isn't mentioned in the book, so you'll have to make a manual ref note, like Pellaeon. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:16, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • We're trying to move away from using "simple maths" in dating refs. Please rephrase it.
  • Are there any images you could get for the article? A Venator Star Destroyer or Tarkin perhaps? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:34, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
    • I've added one of Tarkin. I strongly dislike using generic ship images to represent an unpictured ship and there isn't really anything else I can think of. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:18, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
      • No worries, that's great. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 07:57, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • "Tarkin later discovered that a rebel cell that had become aware of the Death Star's construction had been behind the attack and had them executed." This seems a bit off, and is it really relevant to Burque? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 07:57, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • I included it since it's context for who the people Burque was sent to fight actually were, which seemed relevant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:47, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Just a small thing, but if you have the audio files attached to quotes, wouldn't it make more sense to attribute them to the audiobook page? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:39, August 11, 2018 (UTC)
    • Hmm, using the novel is common practice since the novel is generally more prominent. I guess the text is there as well as the audio, so both are represented. I'd rather leave it as the novel for now, but if you strongly believe this shouldn't be the case I'd prefer to see a discussion on the Senate Hall about it since it would be setting precedent for a lot of status articles, not just this one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:17, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
      • No worries. I thought an AC member told me to do that once which is why I do it on my noms, but it probably doesn't matter anyway. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:42, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I think the first sentence of the intro needs to specify a time period.
  • In the "Skirmish" section quote, it sure sounds like Tarkin says "do your bests"; what does the novel say?
    • It's just best in the novel, guess it's an odd misread or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:22, August 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • You need to add the audiobook to the Appearances
  • Please see my copy-edit for how to format the italics in the Quote template and make sure to follow this in future articles. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:26, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:45, August 13, 2018 (UTC)