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Bulwark Mark I
- Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 01:10, November 16, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Part One of Project Bulwark.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Very nice. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 01:34, November 16, 2010 (UTC)- Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:15, November 16, 2010 (UTC)
- Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 09:36, November 17, 2010 (UTC) - Grunny (talk) 01:57, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Neato. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:31, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
In the History section, I'd like to see a little descriptor introduction of what the Bulwark Fleet is exactly. The inference is obvious, but the NEC describes it as an "armada" of Bulwark Mark I vessels, which I think is important to note.- Done.
I'd also like to see a more specific description of the mini rampage Ningo went on. The Bulwark Fleet did more than "participate in numerous skirmishes," as the article currently describes it. NEC explains that the fleet "smashed [Republic] military outposts."- I was originally going to add more detail, but I didn't want to stray too far away from the subject. The information would be more appropriate in the Bulwark Fleet and Ningo articles, IMO.
- I don't think more detail needs to be added, I just think the wording ought to be adjusted. "Minor skirmishes" and "smashing military outposts" isn't exactly the same thing. The latter gives a certain insight into the destructive capabilities of the Bulwarks that "minor skirmishes" just doesn't convey. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:49, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, I misunderstood. Done. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 23:28, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Ah, I misunderstood. Done. Grand Moff Tranner
- I don't think more detail needs to be added, I just think the wording ought to be adjusted. "Minor skirmishes" and "smashing military outposts" isn't exactly the same thing. The latter gives a certain insight into the destructive capabilities of the Bulwarks that "minor skirmishes" just doesn't convey. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:49, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
- I was originally going to add more detail, but I didn't want to stray too far away from the subject. The information would be more appropriate in the Bulwark Fleet and Ningo articles, IMO.
I think it would be best to provide an article for the Mindor Bulwark. If one was writing the Battle of Mindor article, for example, we would most likely make them to do the same. Also, does the story describe the Bulwark's fate, or what it does specifically in the battle? A brief description to that end probably wouldn't hurt.Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:00, November 23, 2010 (UTC)- The vessel is only mentioned once in the novel; no other details on it exist. As for the article, I'd like to talk to you about this in IRC sometime. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 21:14, November 23, 2010 (UTC)
- The vessel is only mentioned once in the novel; no other details on it exist. As for the article, I'd like to talk to you about this in IRC sometime. Grand Moff Tranner
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:31, November 24, 2010 (UTC)