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Budhila Hestilic Amura
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 09:23, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
- OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 13:05, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- Who knew there could be Hutt philosophers? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:09, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
MasterFred
(talk) 05:45, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:17, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 17:38, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
Object
Ecks
I think you need to do some trimming in the second bio paragraph, which doesn't mention Amura at all. Context is important, but an entire paragraph without a mention of the article subject is excessive. Similarly, you could probably see if you could trim the first intro paragraph a bit as well.1358 (Talk) 11:26, 29 April 2021 (UTC)- In this case, the context is indeed quite relevant, but I've nevertheless somewhat shortened the Bio paragraph, and it also now mentions the subject :P. The intro paragraphs have also been condensed into one. Imperators II(Talk) 16:09, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:38, 16 May 2021 (UTC)