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Broom (individual)

  • Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 12:02, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Ladies and gentleman, the first official nom pertaining to the newly-rediscovered MyComyc strips!

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 13:14, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Brilliant!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 14:57, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote She blinded me with science! IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:28, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 13:16, April 18, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote BROOM! (DOOM) Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:12, April 18, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Threepio actually hit someone? :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:22, April 20, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ~SavageBOB sig 14:43, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • In the bio, you say Broom's hidden lab was on a space station, but later on you say R2 finds him in an underground lab. Is the lab underground in the space station? If so, I wouldn't use underground, as that implies that its on a planet.
    • True. I didn't even realize that, as obvious as it is. Thanks for pointing out. --LelalMekha (talk) 13:12, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • You could probably say that he had a blaster pistol in the P&T.
  • Nice article. 501st dogma(talk) 13:07, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
Savaged…
  • One thing: The first two sentences of BTS jump forward quite a bit in time such that it's hard to see the connection. Can you add just a sentence about how the strips were lost and then rediscovered in 2013 before mentioning that Stradley wanted to publish them? ~SavageBOB sig 13:06, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:26, April 22, 2013 (UTC)