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Brock Starsher
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This guy has been sitting on my to nominate list for a long time, final got round to check the last few sources
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Support
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:35, 6 February 2022 (UTC)- That P&T section is simply perfect :P LucaRoR
(Talk) 17:18, 10 March 2022 (UTC) - UberSoldat93
(talk) 04:05, 12 March 2022 (UTC) - OOM 224 16:59, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
- Samonic (Talk) 17:04, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
Object
Brockaroni
I don't see any need for subsectioning.- The subsection means there's room for two images in the bio, otherwise the first one overlaps with the infobox. Although I'd usually leave three paragraphs unsubsectioned I don't think it's excessive to do so and I'd say overall it benefits the reader more to leave it and keep the image. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
Looks like you uploaded those body images a while ago--on Yotts Oren, for example, the quality looks sharper. Any chance you can improve those?- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:46, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
Missing audiobook.- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
A link and backup link should be provided for the Topps card.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:41, 26 January 2022 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
Luca
I'm not 100% sure that redlinks in sources count as redlinks, but "The Battle of Hoth and the Second Death Star" doesn't have a page.LucaRoR (Talk) 06:44, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- This has been fixed, for the record. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:44, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
- This has been fixed, for the record. UberSoldat93
UberSoldat
The sectioning currently feels a little arbitrary with only 3 paragraphs in the body. I would prefer if it was eliminated entirely.- The sectioning allows for the image in the first paragraph as otherwise it overlaps with the infobox. While I usually wouldn't section three paragraphs, there's nothing forbidding it and I think overall the article and reader benefits more from the image being included then it would from being unsectioned. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
Star Wars: Complete Vehicles links to a disambiguation page. New Edition should also be listed presumably.UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:33, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
- Does the New Edition carry over the image of Starsher? UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:03, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nope. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
- Does the New Edition carry over the image of Starsher? UberSoldat93
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
OOM
"with a black helmet, gloves, a belt, and brown boots" — this doesn't clearly say that the gloves and belt were black as well. Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't the belt a utility belt specifically?OOM 224 22:01, 13 March 2022 (UTC)- Fixed, and yeah I think that'd be reasonable based on its appearance. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:28, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- More a comment than an objection, the word skiff is used 18 times, would it be possible to change a few of them? LucaRoR (Talk) 08:22, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
- Swapped out a couple, if there's any others you want to tweak I'm happy for you to swap some in a copy-edit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:52, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:15, 14 March 2022 (UTC)