- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Brintooin
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 16:16, November 11, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The lack of the full "-ooine" suffix is maddening.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:23, November 11, 2018 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 02:53, November 17, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:56, December 18, 2018 (UTC)- Good work, I really enjoyed reading this. Tommy
Macaroni 17:01, December 27, 2018 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:10, December 30, 2018 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
In the quote it's "baseworld," but the article uses "base world." Should it not use the former?Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:00, December 20, 2018 (UTC)- Sure, just thought it was odd. Imperators II(Talk) 11:00, December 22, 2018 (UTC)
Tommy
Can we get the date for Endor?- Added it to the body. Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, December 26, 2018 (UTC)
In the intro, you say "Johans withdrew the Hammers and any affiliated forces to Brintooin, not wanting to participate in the fighting between the various Imperial warlords", but in the body you say "the Hammers regiment and its affiliated units were shipped off Brintooin to participate in the ensuing Imperial crackdowns and battles between competing Imperial warlords." I know they originally fought but then became isolated, but could you change the wording of the intro to make this a bit more clear? Maybe just chuck in an "eventually" or something.Tommy Macaroni 19:45, December 25, 2018 (UTC)
- Sure, chucked in an "eventually" or something. Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, December 26, 2018 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:10, December 30, 2018 (UTC)