Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Bree Starlighter

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Bree Starlighter

• Nominated by: Stake black ^msg 14:38, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A CAN nomination that got unwieldy. Trust me, it ain't easy writing about a real-world Star Wars character.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:33, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 01:33, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
3. Canon or nah? IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 23:21, April 26, 2014 (UTC)
4. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:12, May 28, 2014 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:35, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Context for Wookiees in the intro.
  • Lee, context is already given. They're a species. I'm sorry, but I'm not going to disrupt the sentence by going into unnecessary detail, explaining what they look like etc., that's off topic.
    • No it's not given. You can say ...on the Wookiee species... and the sentence is not interrupted at all. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:04, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
      • Yes, that's exactly what it says at the moment, though. Stake black ^msg 16:24, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
        • And now it's there. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:46, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
• Mention her first name when you introduce her in the bio.
  • Good catch.
• I believe the nickname should be mentioned in the bio.
  • Right.
• She had fair skin, and sported a blonde and purple hair with a Padawan-like braid. She was also : Please change of of those.
  • What do you mean?
    • You the two sentences both with a "she". Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:04, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
• Redirect in the BtS.
  • The redirect is a temporary April Fool's joke. Stake black ^msg 13:01, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
    • Ah yes, silly me. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:04, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
• Good job, but what was that? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:21, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
• unveiling of Star Tours' first hub on the Earth system: Should this be "in" the Earth system? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:49, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Yeah, you're right. Corrected. Stake black ^msg 14:32, April 7, 2014 (UTC)

El Jefe

• I don't think you can cite her braid being "Padawan-like" to that video, can you? IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:14, April 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Removed. Stake black ^msg 02:18, April 25, 2014 (UTC)

Cav

• Is an article for the "first hub" in the Earth system warranted or not? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:40, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • According to Convenient Daily Departures: The History of Star Tours, this hub is only one terminal in Spaceport THX1138. Per the blog post, other companies also had hubs there. It doesn't seem very relevant to create an article just for that fact. Stake black ^msg 14:31, May 8, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:35, May 29, 2014 (UTC)