Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bree Starlighter

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Bree Starlighter

  • Nominated by: Stake black msg 05:39, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Winterz (talk) 16:53, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvoteHanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:57, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Demos Traxen (talk) 17:20, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:13, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • Since you mention the accessory under her lips, please mention her earrings.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:38, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
  1. Menkooroo
    • I don't think the BTS is self-sourcing. A source should be found for her being at the promotional mall tour and at the grand opening of Hollywood studios.
      • Done.
    • File:Bree-startourslive.jpg should also be re-sourced --- if it's from a youtube video, then that video can be inserted in the "Source" field. Currently, this page is sourced, which doesn't actually include the picture.
      • Done.
    • This and this should be mined for BTS information. Menkooroo (talk) 06:50, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
      • Specifics on this one: It seems worth noting that she did some in-character interviews, and that the events had her promoting Star Tours's first "Earth" hub. Since she did the interviews in-character, I think you could even glean some personality traits and mention them in the BTS; namely her affection for C-3PO and R2-D2 and her "The Empire is great! The Emperor is great!" bits. That stuff definitely seems like prime BTS info.
        • Great tip. Already over 250 words, I'll nominate this for GA after all objections were met.
          • Feel free to archive this nom at any time. Just remember to remove the references in the intro and to change the referencing in the infobox, too, from simply Star Tours: The Adventures Continue to something else. Menkooroo (talk) 14:31, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
            • OK, I'm satisfied. I'll archive it as a failed CAN. Menkooroo (talk) 09:50, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
      • I also suggest including links to those two pages in the "External links" section, and including a leading quote for the BTS. Menkooroo (talk) 14:15, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
    • Come to think of it, I don't think that Star Tours: The Adventures Continue is an appropriate reference for the in-universe information in the article, either. Websites and/or youtube videos featuring her would be more accurate. Especially since the Appearances section sticks a (Promotional materials only) after Star Tours II; simply reffing Star Tours II isn't accurate. Menkooroo (talk) 14:00, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
    • The date of Star Tours II can be narrowed down to between 2 BBY and 0 BBY using this reference note. As such, a date for her employment with Star Tours could be given in this article, and the "era" field in the infobox filled out. Menkooroo (talk) 14:05, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
      • Done. I created STAC date to simplify this. Stake black msg 02:18, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
        • Great! Actually... contact LelalMekha. I believe he figured out how to narrow the date down even further, taking into account a reference to the Yavin IV base. Menkooroo (talk) 04:12, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

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